What do you call this one? Actually, I don’t know. I just make it sound like a poem (or for me, this piece is really a poem
)
I was not in my mood of drafting a lot of paragraphs. So I shortened my daily dillydally by making it a poem. (It sounds like a poem, doesn’t it?) LOL!
Anyway, just give it a shot even though I’m not that good in poetry.
Dillydallying = 8:00AM plus
by jinjin
Kkkkrrrriiiiiiiiingggggggg!!!!!!!!! Kkkkrrrriiiiiiiiingggggggg!!!!!!!!!
At 6:00 AM my bedside digital clock
Annoyingly makes its morning noise
Ugh! I hate it
Especially on weekdays
‘Coz stop dreaming that means
Off to work it urges
But sleep lures me to lay still
And keeps my eyes heavily shut
So I push its button to stop
Then give myself an extension
A 5-minute or worse, more than that.
At almost 7:00 AM, again I wake up
No choice but drag myself away from bed
and scold myself giving a stern, “Hey! Don’t tarry!”
‘Coz I usually then sit on my bed for minutes
With mind wandering somewhere
So another groan, “Ugh! Get going!”
And off I go downstairs
To hurriedly cook rice for breakfast
While eating my meal
Eating, drifting, eating, drifting
Until I finish eating
Then a, “Hurry! Go get your towel!”
And off I go upstairs.
At the bathroom, I say a brief informal prayer,
“Lord, thanks for giving us this day.
Hope I and my family will always be safe and healthy.
Please bless this water,too. Hope I’ll be fine with this.”
Then a splash of water
Trickling down my tiny body
So I stomp my feet to keep me warm a bit
And quickly finish my hygienic rituals.
As I get past our round wall clock
It tick-tocks saying,
“Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!”
Though it is now pointless to hurry
So I dress myself in no haste
Say goodbye to Pa and Ma
And walk down the road
In my normal pace
Arriving at the office
so late…
Don’t be like me guys.
Don’t be late at work. It’s definitely not good.

Comments on: "Dillydallying = 8:00AM plus" (5)
Hi Yramjin!
You’ve got a bubbly poem there! Keep it up!
At most, getting out of bed can really be a drag especially if it’s so cold in the morning and you’ve gotten used to the warmth of your bed. Good thing there’s a cold morning bath to wake your senses.
Cheers!
Hello Hero! You got it right. I always get late at work because I’m such a sleepyhead.LOL! Not only that, blame it to my messy bed, the morning chill, and my unending reveries!!! hahah. My officemates often tease me for being late most of the time.
)))) I’m best at it, you know…hahah!
Many thanks to you for giving time to read and comment on my posts. thanks..thanks..thanks..
so sweet so cute
i almost started to visualise
good Yramjin.
Thanks Aayush..:) your comment is very much appreciated
great
keep it up